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 The Captain Marvel Discussion Thread, ...or Cheeseburger in Space
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 Posted: May 25 2016, 02:45 PM
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Dear tap dancing Christ, Captain Marvel was a complete mess.

The dialogue bubbles were incorrectly pointing to the wrong person or the dialogue was switched.

At one point it's completely unmistakable that character dialogue is switched. Like, where is editorial? There are at least three cases of incorrect dialogue and word bubble formatting that is terribly bewildering as to how this slipped past editing.

The characters' dialogue itself is also generic, which makes the shoddy formatting problems even worse.

Abby sounds less and less like her bitchy self the more this comic continues. She's now just the token contrarian and less of an actual foil for Carol.

LOL @ the two characters who are revealed to be the traitors. SPOILERS:
it's the black fat woman and the tall ginger lumberjack background characters


The motivation is so weak, too. What a disappointing first arc.

From now on all further issues of Cheeseburger in Space, a.k.a. Captain Marvel, will be discussed here.
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Filthy Mutie
 Posted: Jan 19 2017, 02:29 PM
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"Wey're going to make her happen, damnit!"

https://www.yahoo.com/movies/captain-marvel...-231429814.html
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Fringe Division
 Posted: Jan 19 2017, 03:02 PM
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YAAAS, QUEEN!
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